The Author's POV

This novel has a special place in my heart . It has everything i ever wanted great mc check . Great romance and female lead check . Great bromance and side characters check . Actually invested world building check . I mean anyone who wanna read a good academy novel this is classic . And if you don't like academy novels then try this it's everything a good Academy novels should be and if even then you didn't like it guess academy novels are not for you 

This is a really good novel, i'd recommend atleast giving it a try, the first few chapters may be a bit shaky and have infodumps, but after that it's pretty smooth, with some great twists. Rating this lower than a 5 as the ending was rushed and everything felt somewhat forced.

First read since 2022 that really delve me to the novel I thank you for the experience and gotta love it for I want to story to read like this that lead me to the iwkta (that got drop by the author) so that lead me to read other story like this so thank you for the first experience 

one of my first novels that introduced this type of storytelling! I actually enjoyed almost all the characters on how they were portrayed ( those who know on why I said almost all). Not to mention the twist and turns and although the ending felt rushed, I'm glad it ended in a happy ever after.

You won't regret reading!!!

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I really like the concept behind this story, and I genuinely enjoyed reading it. However, there's one glaring issue—a major plot hole that only becomes more prominent as the story progresses.

At first, everything flows smoothly within the "mob character" narrative. But everything changes the moment Lock Academy assigns the Author MC to Class A-25—the class that contains most of the top rankers. This is where the inconsistency begins: there is absolutely no logical reason for Lock Academy to place someone ranked 1750 into a class filled with elite students. Even according to the novel’s internal logic, this move makes no sense. The protagonist himself explains that the closer someone gets to their potential cap, the slower their growth becomes. So why would an elite institution—one explicitly focused on nurturing the future pillars of humanity—assign a student with D-rank potential to a class full of students with A to SSS-rank potential?

What makes this worse is that in Chapter 55, it's stated that there are over 2,000 students in the first year. Assuming these are ranked from 1 to 2000, it would make much more sense for students to be grouped by their rank range. The MC, ranked around 1750, should logically be placed in a class with others in the 1700–1800 range, while the top rankers (the main cast) would be placed in a group of ranks 1–100. Such a structure would naturally increase competition among the strongest students and align with the Academy’s supposed objectives.

This decision seems less like world-building and more like a shortcut by the author to force the MC into interactions with the main cast. Unfortunately, it undermines the entire "mob character" premise and strips the story of the unique charm it started with.

The second major flaw is the gradual loss of the mob character's core advantage. One of the appeals of a mob character is their ability to stay under the radar—mostly unaffected by the chaos and drama surrounding the central protagonists. However, as the story progresses, the MC becomes increasingly entangled with the main storyline and key characters. This not only nullifies the original narrative concept but also removes the tension and novelty that comes from viewing events from a background character’s perspective.

The third issue lies in the inconsistent portrayal of the MC’s family. Despite supposedly having a supportive household, the MC acts as if he’s completely alone—rarely asking for help or receiving any meaningful support. It's stated that his father is the leader of a mid-sized guild, yet the MC starts off with no skills, resources, or even basic manuals. Realistically, someone in that position should have access to at least a few 1- to 3-star skill manuals. If his father lacks even that, how did he become a guild leader in the first place?

One of the clearest examples of this disconnect is the stock market scenario. Instead of asking his family for money—something that could be justified with a simple excuse—he recklessly enters a dungeon, risking his life and nearly dying. He could have easily borrowed the funds, turned a profit, and returned the original amount. This behavior feels forced and inconsistent with both his background and the logic of the world.

author wrote this novel in a very fun way it was enjoyable but at the near the end it had a bit of a fall still very good novel his other works is better than this one

Ok i have read this entire novel twice now and I think I am qualified enough to give a proper review.

This novel initially starts slow and has lot of info dumping in the beginning but believe me it is utterly important. It quickly picks up speed and story only keeps getting better. Everything in this novel is so intricately connected and woven with each other that I can't explain in words. It's one hell of a ride. It's gets a bit stale in the end like around 800 chapter but plough through as the ending is just as fantastic. The MC is incredible and the interaction between character are just hilarious and just as emotional. 

Simply put its one of the best novel and please read it. I promise you won't regret it.

To put it simply it's a good book. With good pacing, plot & character depth and development. The first 100 or so chapters are kinda slow but after that the plot picks up. The arcs aren't too long while also improving the worldbuilding. All the characters have development with the protagonist going through various mental stages. However, there will be some criticisms are inconsistencies regarding the plot as well as sometimes disregarding some plot points (is kind of fixed later on however it ruins immersion for some). But I can say that the ending is well done. All in all I would give it an overall rating of 4.8/5

At first I wanted to stop at the first chapter, but the more I read the more exciting it became, and now I've read up to 500 chapters. Recommendation for all of you who like stories that reincarnate into a novel world that he created himself.

The start was below average and the end felt rushed but I just can't give it a score below 4.5. like I know it wasn't that good but I do feal emotional connected with it cause this was my 3rd web novel and 1st completed one. Give it a try at least read till ch50 before calling it quits.