Reincarnated Lord: I can upgrade everything!

ok, so I'm editing my review. While the start of this novel isn't good at all, the later chapters are somewhat okay. The writing here feels like ChatGPT 3.5 wrote the whole thing with no human review.

 Previous review: 

 half star rating-This doesn't deserve a 4 star rating, so I'm giving it half a star to lower the average. 

so, my preference in novels for things to be logical, and secondly, have a reasonable probability for stuff. If the author makes the Mc draw the best whatever in first try everytime, that's fine, but- it has to be explained. This is very important. If the story makes me feel like the author is dumb, I won't like it. 

Going to be honest here but this work doesn't worth 5 stars. It was not perfect in any means. Let's start with the thing i hate from this story.

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The speed of this story going is super fast paced. I feel like we're riding on a f1 car that we can't properly see the scenery. When other story suffers from slow progression, this one however, suffers from lack of explanation.

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Next, powers and abilities were not properly established. Who's the strongest? What is the comparison? All i know is the MC soldier is getting stronger and stronger but i didn't how will they fare with the strongest power. Bcs frankly after the strongest foe come more strongest foe. So who is the strongest here actually?

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This point brings me to the next one,  Main villain. There's a lotttt of villain in here but none of them is the Main Villain. Many of the villain are not dead yet and the author decided to pop a dozen more. What was even the point creating so many villains like this when there's no big evil to defeat? Who was the main villain here? His reincarnated ex lover and boss? The immortal prince? Like tell me bcs i feel like they're not. And why even they be considered a villain since everyone motivation is the same. To rule the world. Even MC motivation is the same, so what's the difference between MC and his opposition? THAT'S RIGHT, NOTHING.

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Mc is the most confusing character i ever read in a story. He's reincarnated to the game he created and the moments he wakes up he's already ready to become a lord. His motivation to wage war? Does it ever explained? He want's to rule the world, to make his name etched in the history but why?..... He's not the original Asher. He just inhabiting his body. So where this motivation come from? Like, 21st century man thrust into a game world suddenly think "Let's take more land" i can't fathom it. Sooo weird. Even more weirder when he get that kyros talent. Suddenly he have more foes bcs the talent is alive and it has enemies. God, i'm done.

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Side characters, pfft. Don't talk abt them bcs they have none of development. Aside from each of them getting stronger we don't know what motivates them. They're either a villain who wants to kill MC, or a subject who loyal to MC.

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Romance, ugh. Bland as f. I don't even understand why it even introduced to the story. The FL Sepphira is described as the most beautiful women ever alive and ofc MC gotta make her his. And what are the odds that the love of his live comes from a fairy royal family that wants to kill him. Hahahaha.

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War, more war, and war. That's all you'll get from reading this story. Kingdom building? Yeah s*it. It's just upgrade after upgrade, no satisfaction reading it. There's no active effort into make the kingdom bigger but it's the system doing all the job. Suddenly wall get bigger, road get smoother bla bla bla.

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3 stars is the most generous i can give since the author even bother to write 300+ chapters. I commend his/her efforts but frankly, this is not for me. Well go ahead and read it though, you'll be the judge.

The book is not good at the starting but gets very interesting later on. Fight descriptions also get better and worldbuilding also gets better. so just skim through first chapters if you want , but it is a pretty good novel.

And overall just no. I get some of u like it but for this ain't it for me. I guess it's depends on personal taste but nah, story is mid as it's possibly can be.

I won't really recommend it to everyone to read since it's not everyone's cup of tea, but you have to give it a good few chapters before it really starts to get interesting, also the translation was really easy to read 

This is such a fast-paced novel.Wow, it's moving so quickly im at chapter 50 or something 

I would love to have more information about what's happening.

There are so many things happening all at once – it’s like a marathon!

I really enjoyed reading it, but I’d appreciate it if the story could slow down a little.

5/5 for enjoyment 3/5 for writing quality.

Beginning is not that great but it gets better later on. It's basically the same as what Solo leveling is for anime, slop that's only good for dopamine but not a masterpiece. But i don't really care about writing quality or good story as long as i feel excitement so it's one of my fav wns.

Preaty great and consistent story. The power scaling in the world makes almost no sense for the kingdoms/empire politics. But otherwise the kingdom building is rather noneexistant, like in a strategy game you buy an instant upgrade and boom city bigger and better. It is wierd how nobody picked up on it from the upper echalons. Poor inteligence network unless story needs it to be strong enough to topple kingdoms i guess.

 Well-written and enjoyable novel to read. I don't understand why people give this book one star. I'm aware that it may not appeal to everyone, but still. It has to be at least reasonable.   

For me it is interesting concept. Romance is mid. War is constant and kingdom building is all about system. Character development is mid. Everything is mid overall for me. You can read it if you dont have anything to read just dont expect much. 3 star due to interesting concept .