Elysium's Multiverse

There goes another potentially great book

The book is gud but can be/could've been really great but sadly almost every body wants to write a hero mc who has good morals n saves ppl n all dat, which I still don't knw why ppl do it.

 Lemme just point d flaws out hopefully someone actually read em m learn from it.

If u are going to write a novel with a mc with powers/race on d dark side especially like a vampire like in this one, ur best bet is to go with a neutral personality mc, as in he doesn't go around saving damsels, children,or anything that's in trouble and he doesn't go on pointless slaughter sprees either he just sticks to his business, kills if it's benefits him or if he needs to otherwise he leaves ppl alone n ppl leaves him alone, while looking after his family, subordinates etc.

It's takes away the need to bring up forced damsel in distress/ppl saving plots and then writing a dumb reason like d mc risking his life to save a girl/ guy because she might knw where d exit is, it's a dungeon u clear it to get out, or having to pull dumb plot armors wins because d mc will not stand for wickedness/d death of ppl so he proceeds to fight something dat shld kill him easily but he somehow still wins.

And also d whole moral existential crisis thing won't be needed, where every kill has some mini inner moral crisis.

That being said the book is gud for ppl who like heroes with morals and save d world n all dat, Which I'm not. A very gud example of wat I just wrote where is Darius Supreme, Reverend Insanity etc